ok with you before we skip — awfully。 I think you were a bit discouraged about the “W。 Desire” because a lot of ignorant fools slated it; but in my opinion you were wrong。 That work I believe will last。 It is extraordinarily liked by many who can understand。 I told you about the American Egyptologist I met; for instance; who reads it every night!
Well now: I don’t care much for your Covenanter who would speak Scotch; etc。 (i。e。 at first sight)。 He would not have much of a public or enlist the heart。 Can you not think of something “big and beautiful;” something that has an idea in it? Something for choice that has to do with old Greece (which you know) and with old Egypt (which I know?)。 Something with room in it for a few of your beautiful verses (I am not laying it on; old fellow; only saying the truth)。 In short; a real poetical romance such as we might both be proud of。 Now don’t toss this aside; but think。 You know all the old world legends: there must be some that would lend themselves to this general scheme: that of the quest for the divine which must (for the purpose of story) be symbolised by woman。 You see the thing must have a heart; mere adventures are not enough: I can turn them out by the peck。 A motive; friend; a motive! that’s what we need; and one that the world knows of。
How about a variant of the Faust legend? How about the Sons of God and the Daughters of Men? Something grand and pure and simple; something to lift up! Now don’t be discouraged; for though we are both antique; I know that we can do it; if only we can find the theme。
Where is our Hypatia? Let’s do a big thing for once and die happy! Please answer。
Yours ever;
H。 Rider Haggard。
The last notes I ever received from him were written in February of th