To return to “The World’s Desire。” This work also came out in due course; and was violently attacked: so I gather from Lang’s letters; for I have none of the reviews。 All that I remember about them is the effort of its assailants to discriminate between that part of the work which was written by Lang and that part which was written by myself — an effort; I may add; that invariably failed。 However; all these things have long gone by; and the book remains and — is read; by some with enthusiasm。
Here is another note from Lang from Scotland; headed Ravensheugh; Selkirk; Friday。
Stevenson says he is “thrilled and chilled” by Meriamun。 He thinks much of it “too steep;” bars Od(ysseus) killing so many enemies — exactly what Longinus says of Homer — and fears Meriamun is likely to play down Helen。 He is kind enough to say “the style is all right;” and adds a poem on Odysseus。 I’ll send you the letter presently。
I suppose that Lang did send this letter; and that I returned it to him。 I believe that subsequently he lost both the letter and the poem。 Luckily; however; I took the trouble to keep a copy of the latter; and here it is。
1。
Awdawcious Odyshes;
Your conduc’ is vicious;
Your tale is suspicious
???An’ queer。
Ye ancient sea…roamer;
Ye dour auld beach…ber;
Frae Haggard to Homer
???Ye veer。
2。
Sic veerin’ and steerin’!
What port are ye neerin’
As frae Egypt to Erin
???Ye gang?
Ye ancient auld blackguard;
Just see whaur ye’re staggered
From Homer to Haggard
???And Lang!
3。
In stunt and in strife
To gang seeking a wife —
At your time o’ life
???It was wrang。
An’ see! Fresh afflictions